Some people believe that to become a vegetarian is the only way to keep healthy. Do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that the only method to get lean is pursuing

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vegetarianism. From my perspective, I find

this

standpoint

is

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unreasonable because there are several

way

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to develop

the

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healthy standard

besides

this

way. I will give my detailed

expanation

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explanation

in the following paragraph.

To begin

with,

admitedly

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admittedly

, digesting vegetables and fruits is

the

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a

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fruitful mode of detoxing and losing weight.

First

, these types of food contain

a

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insignificant amount of

cholesteron

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cholesterol

. In fact,

this

compound, which is abundant in numerous kinds of animal meat, is the culprit of several serious maladies, namely obesity and

cardiomypathy

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cardiomyopathy

. Thanks to eating only plants, human bodies

are not requires

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to take

this

reactant.

Second

, natural products

benefits

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the individuals' digestive system. To elaborate, there is a remarkable number of products originating from

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the herb

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herb

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,

such

as herbal tea,

are

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able to support

for

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the operation of

digestive

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the digestive

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system. Specifically, these types of drinks accelerate the process of crushing food.

In addition

,

besides

becoming a vegetarian, there are a significant number of

way

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to increase the well-being quality fruitfully. At the simplest,

prolonging

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time

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for doing physical exercise

assist

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individuals to burn the

amount

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number

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of

calorines

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calories

in their bodies.

In particular

, involving in physical activities offers innumerable advantages,

such

as honing

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stamina.

Additionally

, setting up a scientific lifestyle helps people to lengthen

lifespans

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. Specifically,

maitaining

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maintaining

several positive routines like possessing three meals a day and

sleep

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early

helps

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employees to release stress from official hours relaxing the nervous system. In short, not only is

become

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becoming

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a vegetarian able

support

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to support

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humanity to keep healthy

,

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but there

are

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a myriad of methods to enhance the healthy standard,

such

as participating in physical activities and ensuring a

balance

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lifestyle.