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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, the number of
people
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 who are professionals increases.
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 some
people
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 think that experts must
work
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 in the
country
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 where they learnt their jobs, others believe that there should not be any obligations to
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 in a certain
country
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. I am inclined to believe that every
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 can choose to
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 in the areas where they want.
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 with, the education in some states are different from others so some professionals
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 as doctor and engineers cannot
work
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 in these states.
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, in some schools, education started with basic mathematics, while in other schools it began with sophisticated math.
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, if you graduated from any university which is located in Turkey as a dentist, your certificate is not allowed in other
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 due to different levels of learning.
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, they should be required to
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 in the
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 where they completed their learning.
On the other hand
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, job opportunities abroad are much so
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 want to go to another
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 where they can improve themselves.
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, developed
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 have a lot of facilities like high technology materials, various types of laboratories and numerous books.
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,
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 the Turkish scientist Uğur Şahin graduated from ITU which is the best-known university in Turkey, he decided to continue their research in Germany due to the lack of lab materials.
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, he invented a vaccine for covid19 in 2021.
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,
people
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 should be free to
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 in any
country
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. To conclude, it is not necessary for
people
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 to
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 in the
country
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 where they completed their education because sometimes their
countries
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 have limited equipment for research.
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, it is predictable that the number of
people
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 who prefer to
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 in developed
countries
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 will increase over time.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professionals
  • doctors
  • engineers
  • required
  • training
  • home country
  • cultural
  • linguistic
  • advantages
  • economic impact
  • free
  • another country
  • globalization
  • international collaboration
  • improving
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • experience
  • opinion
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