In many countries, fast food is becoming cheaper and more widely available. Do the disadvantages of this outweigh the advantages?

Eating healthy has been a well-discussed topic recently in our society. Many people explain that cheaper
food
is worse for human life since it doesn't have the necessary nutrients for a good life.
Nonetheless
, others claim that junk
food
, on some occasions, is well if you don´t want to waste time having dinner. My personal opinion, is the drawback of fast
food
outweighs the benefits, and in
this
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I am going to give my
reasonss
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reasons
. On one hand, fast
food
has several downsides
on
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our
daily-cuisine
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.
For example
: It is well-known that these kinds of meals produce weight gain affecting our quality of life, above all, In juveniles who don't receive a balanced diet from their family.
Also
, junk foodstuff harms persons with obesity due to they tend to augment their weight more quickly than other persons.
In addition
, another issue is when you eat not healthily, you won't be able to have a good physical condition so you may not play any sports
such
as basketball, full or rugby.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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