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Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment what damage does plastics do to the environment? What can be done by government and individuals to solve this problem

#plastic #bags #bottles #environment #damage #plastics #government #individuals
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major
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society . Among several,
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waste
plastics
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 items like
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a bottle
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bottle
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,bags and other packaging are harmful to
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environtment
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environment
 and living beings. In
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the
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how
plastic
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waste
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effects
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 the health of human beings and life of other animals and possible
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actions
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 to stop
accumulation
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 of
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wastage
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.
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, most of the commodity plastics are non-biodegradable and exist on the earth over a long period of time, which leads to several
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accumulation
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 of
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plastic
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 mostly
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 up in the unscientific burning of them – to clean the location and reduce the
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. But ,
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 uncontrolled
plastic
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 pyrolysis leads to
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 of hazardous gases
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atmosphere
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get
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 polluted.
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,
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recent research shows
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 inhaling
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such
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waste
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 gas from polymer even can create cancer.
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,
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dumping
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out side
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 or
in
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 water will be eaten by animals from plants and
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 , and
this
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finally
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 their death
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persons
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 can contribute equally to avoid the problems by proper segregation of
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 at home and
implement
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of
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suitable
policy
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policies
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 to
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recycle
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 respectively. If an individual sort the
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waste
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 , it would be easy to process for any kind of recycling.
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reuse
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the reuse
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 process. Our public system should support
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this
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 by arranging to collect
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and
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for
further
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 processing.
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,
the
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 can incorporate incentives for
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 recycling , so that can get much attention from the corporates. By doing,
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 combined effort from government and
citizen
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citizens
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 can solve
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 a certain extent. In conclusion,
plastic
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 is a major threat to
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society and thoughtful action from the government and individuals is necessary to overcome or reduce its impact.
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