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WHEN A COUNTRY DEVELOPS ITS TECHNOLOGY, THE TRADITIONAL SKILLS AND WAYS OF LIFE DIE OUT. IT IS POINTLESS TO TRY AND KEEP THEM ALIVE. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT

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 these days developed countries started investing more in machinery to take part in worldwide trade.
This
 developed
technology
 creates a direct impact on traditional skills. I completely agree with the above statement and to support my opinion I will give some strong reasons.
First
 and foremost, because of the competition for
development
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 of
technology
, each and every country has
follow
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this
 trend blindly and to
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, somewhere they forgot their traditions and customs. There are lots of drawbacks to losing their traditions.
For instance
, modern
technology
 has been used for many tasks
such
 as
agricultures
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, industries and many more and machine has replaced
people
’s manual tasks in most cases.
Furthermore
, the internet is causing a lack of human touch. To illustrate,
people
 nowadays prefer video calls, voice calls or any social chatting platform to communicate. All features have affected directly
on
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traditional skills.
Also
, some historical
event
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 has been disappeared nowadays.
Secondly
, because of modern
technology
,
people
 nowadays use different items which are made up of using
technology
.
consequently
, unique handicraft items have become vanishes
day
 by
day
. Which directly impacts on country’s economy.
As a result
, poor
people
 have become poorer.
Last
 but not the least, the development of
technology
 is the only reason that
people
 have become lazy
day
 by
day
 and they are always depending on
technology
 for their daily work.
On the other hand
,
development
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 of
technology
 plays a prominent and vital role in every individual’s life, become
peoples’
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 lives
has
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 become easier and
also
 it helps to cure many diseases. Agglomerating all the above points elaborated, I would like to conclude that it is good to develop
technology
 in
country
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, but the
people
 of that country do not forget the traditional skills and ways of life. .
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Technological advancement
  • Efficiency
  • Global connectivity
  • Cultural identity
  • Diversity
  • Innovation
  • Coexist
  • Sustainable
  • Eco-friendly
  • Energy-intensive
  • Practical skills
  • Self-sufficiency
  • Homogenize
  • Preservation
  • Global diversity
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