You have recently moved into a new house and have noticed that the garden is in need of some maintenance. Write a letter to your landlord requesting permission to make the necessary improvements.

Dear

Mr.

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Joy, I hope you are doing well. I am writing

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letter with regards to the maintenance of

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garden

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the garden

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.

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, I would like to thank you for the installation of new heaters in

bedrooms

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the bedrooms

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and kitchen, which I requested

to

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from

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you earlier. I have been looking for some customized furniture, As a person living in the city

more

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than thirty years, If you know any sellers please provide the contact number. I have noticed some maintenance

required

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in the

garden

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. The tap connection in the left corner of the

garden

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is broken. I closed the main valve of the

garden

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to avoid water loss. The bench in the middle of the

garden

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is

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also requires

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require some repair, it is not standing properly

on

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in

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its position, It might need to weld in the base unit. I have noticed that

the

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apply

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plenty of lights in the

garden

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are not functioning. I am requesting you

to

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send

maintenance

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the maintenance

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team. I prefer

on

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Sunday because I will be available at home. I

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forwards to hearing from you Yours sincerely Jennifer Ramos