Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different culture and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is no doubt about
ghe
the fact that Correct your spelling
the
music
is a crucial part of individual's
life . Correct article usage
an individual's
However
, there are some who opine that music
is the best way to bring masses of different customs and ages together. In a subsequent , paragraph I intended to shed light on the given topic with proper illustrations and appropriate
conclusion.
Analysing the statement and explaining Add an article
an appropriate
further
, the first
and foremost reason is that flok can meet one another in concerts . By this
I mean that if a famous singer arranges Add a comma
,this
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show Correct article usage
a live
in
particular
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a particular
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era
then
people
of different culture
and age Fix the agreement mistake
cultures
group
will come to Fix the agreement mistake
groups
see
, so it gives Correct pronoun usage
themsee
himsee
hersee
chance
to Correct article usage
the chance
public
to talk and make friends . Add an article
the public
For example
, the
popular Correct word choice
if the
indian
singer Change the capitalization
Indian
arijit
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Arijit
singh
performs in concert Change the capitalization
Singh
then
many people
from Correct article usage
the muslim
muslim
and Change the capitalization
Muslim
hindu
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Hindu
religion
will visit it. Fix the agreement mistake
religions
Secondly
, communication with each other would make good bonds between them . In addition
to this
, folk can share their opinions on lyrics as well as talk about their favorite
songs . Change the spelling
favourite
Furthermore
, this
gives an opportunity to public
for being united.
Correct article usage
the public
On the other hand
, some people
prefer to listen
songs Add the preposition
tolisten
not
by their meaning , so Add the comma(s)
,not
this
proves that they like melody . Moreover
, there are many music
albums in various languages , which flok do not prefer because they want to listen
the Add the preposition
tolisten
music
of their own language. For instance
, if a foreign single sing a song then
who
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those who
english
will avoid Change the capitalization
English
to listen
.
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listening
Conclusion
, I indeed think that Change preposition
In conclusion
music
can bring the public of many customs and ages together because the
number of Correct article usage
a
people
love
to Change the verb form
loves
listen
it.Add the preposition
tolisten
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