Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
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people
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change
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occurred
climate
change
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climate
change
. I disagree with the statement above because if people
do not avoid the
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climate
change
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the
global warming will occur and Correct article usage
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preventing
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prevention
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climate
change
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the earth
People
can be more aware of how to keep the earth
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conditioners
examples
. If individuals Fix the agreement mistake
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change
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environmentally
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as a result
the earth
would be normal. By contrast
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contributions
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earth
stable.
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disasters
be increase
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increase
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the earth’s
climate
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occurrence
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a natural
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disasters
such
as forest fires/bushfires. This
issue should be prevented by both citizens and government
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the government
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, society could reduce the
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transports
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, government
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the government
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strict laws for Correct article usage
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people
who break the rules, hence
people
can not easily demage
the environment.
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the earth’s
climate
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apply
climate
change
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