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Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some
people
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 always yearn for new experiences in
life
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 and are never afraid of trying new
things
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. Others,
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, are happy doing the same thing and living in the same place all through their
life
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 primarily because they do not like changes.
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 essay will discuss both these attitudes. Personally, I believe that a community that embraces changes and dares to try new
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 live
life
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 to the fullest.
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 with, the folk who try new
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 are often risk-takers and adventure seekers. They believe that
life
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 is a constant journey, and they often have an unquenchable thirst to visit as many places as they can, try as many dishes as they come across, take part in numerous adventurous activities and try different career paths in their
life
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.
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people
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 take risks in their personal and professional
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.
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 is why they are either hugely successful or live a nomadic
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.
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, one of my university friends started travelling when all others were busy looking for a job. Due to
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, he was struggling financially while others were stable in their jobs and earnings.
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, after ten years of our graduation,
this
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 friend, who is
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 a famous travel blogger on YouTube and an investigative journalist, earns at least 10 times higher than any of us.
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 success is not always assured but comes to those who embrace non-traditional
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 and try new
things
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.
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, many
people
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 are just happy doing the same thing over and over again and trying the
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 they are already familiar with.
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 approach involves fewer perils but often lacks big rewards and experience in
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. Due to
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 mentality, many
people
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 are not interested in moving to a different city or trying a new career path despite their potential of doing something greater and bigger. Interestingly, many
people
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 who are afraid to take perils or try new stuff often claim to live a less complicated
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.
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, I have seen a person who always keeps himself restricted by a boundary and does not like hiking new apex or taking the challenge to win any unfamiliar event. But I believe that
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 is not a way to live
life
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 to the fullest as it lacks adventure and never brings out our true potential in
life
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.  To conclude, doing the same stuff and living in the same place come with little risk, but lack adventure and tremendous rewards. Contrary to
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, taking challenges and embracing new
things
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 come with enormous danger but the rewards are
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 huge.

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Novelty
  • Routine
  • Comfort zone
  • Risk-taker
  • Risk-averse
  • Enrichment
  • Personal growth
  • Innovation
  • Creativity
  • Stability
  • Tradition
  • Habit
  • Familiarity
  • Personal enrichment
  • Life stages
  • Fulfilling
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