Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoos. Other believe that there are good reasons for having zoos. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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warming problem has Correct article usage
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an increase
the increase
increase
in the world it is harmful to every living Wrong verb form
increased
creatures
and Fix the agreement mistake
creature
also
some types of animals
and birds are extinct day by day. Moreover
, these days, animals
are used in entertainment such
as zoos
, Change preposition
in zoos
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and circus
circus
. Fix the agreement mistake
circuses
Therefore
, folks think that wild animals
should not kept
in Change the verb form
be kept
zoos
. Its
lives in Correct your spelling
It
natural
environment . Add an article
the natural
a natural
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argued that Fix the agreement mistake
Others
zoos
are best
place to give information about Change the article
the best
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the habit
habit
of Fix the agreement mistake
habits
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the animal
an animal
animal
. I will discuss both points of view and give my opinion in the ensuing paragraphs.
On the one hand, people think that wild Fix the agreement mistake
animals
animals
have freedome
to where they live. We do not right to Correct your spelling
freedom
conservation
of wild Add an article
the conservation
animals
. In addition
, wild animals
are kept in cages or limited space. As a result
, the
life span would be decreased , because they cannot Change the word
their
fulfill
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fulfil
thier
need in the artificial environment. Correct your spelling
their
Beside
, zoo Correct your spelling
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animal
rely on Fix the agreement mistake
animals
human
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humans
they
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and they
loss
the Replace the word
lose
freedome
to hunt for food. Correct your spelling
freedom
For example
, the line depend
on Change the verb form
depends
critter
, they hunt by themselves and Add an article
the critter
a critter
then
eat. However
, in the zoos
worker give food in
the limit. Change preposition
apply
Futhermore
, some people Correct your spelling
Furthermore
exhibits
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exhibit
animals
with the aim of making money.
On the other hand
, other
argued that Correct pronoun usage
others
conservation
of Correct article usage
the conservation
creatures
in cages are give information about them. Zoos
play a vital role in protect
wildlife. Change the verb form
protecting
Socity
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Society
Security
think
that it Change the verb form
thinks
is helps
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helps
to
education and Change preposition
apply
scientifi
research. Today, most Correct your spelling
scientific
of
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apply
medical
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the medical
researchs
are rely on Correct your spelling
research
researchers
creatures
. For instance
, scientist
makes more vaccines for human. In the Add an article
the scientist
a scientist
world
human population are more than other living Add a comma
,world
creatures
. So, directly
experiment on Change the word
direct
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the human
human
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humans
that
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apply
affect
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affects
on over
the world. Change preposition
apply
Hence
, scientists firstly
experiment on Change the word
first
animals
and it successful
on them after Add a missing verb
was successful
launched
new vaccines and medicines. Wrong verb form
launching
Like wise
, Correct your spelling
Likewise
zoos
can help to protect endangered species and scientists studys
on animal behaviours.
In conclusion, Correct your spelling
studies
study
zoos
have only some advantages rather than it is entertainment
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an entertainment
place
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places
to
humans. While Change preposition
for
,
every wild Remove the comma
apply
creatures
body Change noun form
creature's
structures
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structure
is make
that resist Change the verb form
make
their
body in Correct pronoun usage
its
natural
atmosphere. Add an article
a natural
the natural
Therefore
, I agree with former
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the former
view point
wild Correct your spelling
viewpoint
animals
should not kept
in limited spaces.Change the verb form
keep
be kept
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