Many people use distance learning program to study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the benefit as much attending college or universities. To what extent do you agree and disagree?

Nowadays, many

people

use

distance

learning

program

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programs

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to

study

at home. But other

people

do not

use

this

method

because these

people

think that

method

is not effective and comfortable for themselves.

Moreover

, they assume , attending

college

or

university

are

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is

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better than

distance

learning. I think that

beneficial

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a beneficial

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method

is attending

college

or

university

.

Additionally

, l presume,

if

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it

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has different ways and

method

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methods

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of

distance

learning. .any

people

choose

attending

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to attend

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college

and

university

for themselves and their generation. If paragraphs

to

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are to

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come , we shall see both

the

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perspective and l shall put forth my views. These days, technology and educational effectiveness are increasing and improving day by day .

Moreover

, many

people

use

different technology and one of them ,

they

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is they

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use

telephone and computer.

Therefore

, they are working and finding

solve

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solutions

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for

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to

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their problem with

telephone

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the telephone

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. So, many

people

presume ,

distance

learning is effective and better than

attend

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attending

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college

or

university

because

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the telephone

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telephone

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telephones

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and

computer

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computers

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have become

on

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one

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piece

their

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of their

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life .

For example

, some

people

have

plane

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plans

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for their graduates and they choose

distance

learning for themselves.

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Furthermore

, they

use

distance

learning but they cannot benefit as much

attending

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from attending

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college

or

university

.

Then

, they realize soo late

this

method

is not useful and comfortable for them . But, they

have

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do have

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not much time to

learning

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learn

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and

studying

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study

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. If they had chosen

right

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way

, they would have achieved a lot of success and they would not have lost much time . I think most

of

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apply

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the

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apply

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people

use

on

old

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the old

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method

.

Old

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method

is attending

college

or

university

to

study

. I presume, if many

people

go to

college

or

university

to learn and

study

, obviously, they will

be achieve

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achieve

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their goals and they will be

scholar

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scholars

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and intelligent. If

who

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someone

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is going to

college

or

university

to

study

,

this

person will be sensible and their

world-look

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world look

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will be wide than

who

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those who

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is

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are

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studying with

distance

learning.

Moreover

, who is going to

university

or

school

,

this

person

meet

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meets

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and

bond

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bonds

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with other

people

.

For instance

, two pupils are studying every day and

once

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one

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pupil

use

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uses

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distance

learning but

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the other

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other pupil

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another pupil

other pupils

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always

go

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goes

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to

school

.

Furthmore

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Furthermore

, they are spending equal time for themselves but their knowledge is not equal .

Boy

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always attending

school

and his knowledge

better

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is better

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than who is always

use

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using

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distance

learning. In my opinion,

alternative

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and right

way

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ways

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of attending

school

or

university

. In conclusion, many

people

presume

better

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a better

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way

of

this

attending

college

or

university

for many citizens.

Additionally

, most

people

know which

way

is better and

effective

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more effective

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for

themselves

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them

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on

the

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apply

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top of that , they believe,

lf

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if

they go to

college

or

university

to

study

, they will

be achieve

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achieve

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their goals and success.