Some countries are struggling with an increase in the rate of crime. Many people think that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce these increasing levels of crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt about the fact that the

crime

rate is ameliorating in many nations. So,it is believed by many masses that having more patrol men on the roads is the best way to overcome

this

problem. I partly agree with

this

statement and shall fortify

this

with suitable arguments and necessary illustrations before citing my feasible conclusion. On the one hand, the

first

and perhaps the most important reason behind

this

seems to be having more patrolling

of

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police on the streets in

violence

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areas,

crime

can be prevented. In brief, if there

is

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police on the streets ,

then

offenders will not do illegal

activities

. Because they might have fear of the policeman.

Thus

, it helps to reduce

the

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crime

rates in regions. The

second

reason behind

this

is that having patrol men would be benefited

to

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the residents.

For instance

, if there is something unlawful happening,

then

city dwellers can easily report

this

to the police officers,

therefore

they can be caught easily and

this

can

fruitful

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to overcome these kinds of actions .

On the other hand

, it would be better to install the camera on the streets and super malls.

Hence

, criminals may think twice to do illegal

activities

at

such

places.

In addition

to

this

,

government

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should create a job to solve

this

trouble. By

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I mean that most of the offenders do crimes owing to unemployment, as they do not have money to satisfy their basic needs

such

as food and shelter.

Therefore

, by providing

employments

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, we can resolve

this

issue.

Moreover

,

authority

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can not only make strict

law

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but

also

ban the consumption of drugs and alcohol because many awful

activities

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under the influence of it. Meanwhile, individuals should teach their offspring about right and wrong things. In conclusion, from the aforementioned points, it is aptly seen that having a number of

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a policeman

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policeman

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on roads

is

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reduces the

crime

rates, though giving job opportunities and making strict rules by the government can decrease

crime

activities

.