Some countries are struggling with an increase in the rate of crime. Many people think that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce these increasing levels of crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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crime
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under the influence of it. Meanwhile, individuals should teach their offspring about right and wrong things.
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