You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter: Describe what you enjoyed about the course Say how much cooking you have done since the course Suggest another cookery course you’d like the school to offer

Dear sir, Greetings of the day, I am writing
this
letter to share a magnificent review of the culinary module which you presented
last
week at Radiant high school. It was a very fruitful lesson we learned to cook in absence of parents we won't have to depend on them. The instructors and the team were very much helpful in each and every step and I am a big fan of Mexican foods I really quite enjoyed the whole session from the very
first
minute. The lasagna recipe was indeed very easy to follow. I was amazed by the way the spices were blended and the pasta was marinated with a cheese base. After trying it myself at home, I was successful in making my parents lick their fingers with my lasagna dish.
Moreover
, I
also
made tofu biryani, chicken quesadilla and shawarma. I have
also
subscribed to your emails for upcoming new recipes. I tried to bake a two-level cake.
However
, I do not have any luck getting it to stand freely. I would really appreciate it if you can offer a cake-baking class, according to your convenience. Yours sincerely. Vrushal
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