some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, a group of
people
prefer to proceed with the same even if having bad times with it while others are not. In this
essay, different choices of people
are discussed and stated as which one is better for me.
First
of all, people
confront so many challenges during their life
in order to reach their goals. Moreover
, our lives have upsides and downsides most of the time, especially the trend of it always fluctuates. For instance
, every dark situation comes with its light and vice versa. Since,
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difficulties
in someone's life
will probably fade away in the end and people
can hold this
patiently knowing this
fact.
On the other hand
, most of the time challenges and struggles bring valuable opportunities to people
to improve the standards of their lives. For this
reason, when they are dealing with difficulties
, they should embrace and allow them for taking more steps further
instead
of struggling with them. For instance
, if you have some economical difficulties
, you can live with your family. At one point, people
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Although
it seems a very common situation, it can be very difficult to make the necessary changes mostly. However
, it is essential for a growing life
that everybody find their own path and make the necessary changes.
In my opinion, being patient and learning lessons build trustworthy relationships. For example
, most supervisors expect their employees not to fall apart easily and tend to overcome these difficulties
patiently. But, if you do not feel valued at your work despite meeting all the expectations, this
is the time for you to look for another opportunity.
In conclusion, although
it is a matter of life
for handling difficult
situation and holding it, making necessary improvements and changes keep Add an article
the difficult
people
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