some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, a group of
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prefer to proceed with the same even if having bad times with it while others are not. In
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are discussed and stated as which one is better for me.
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of all,
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confront so many challenges during their
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in order to reach their goals.
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, our lives have upsides and downsides most of the time, especially the trend of it always fluctuates.
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, every dark situation comes with its light and vice versa. Since
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all
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in someone's
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will probably fade away in the end and
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can hold
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patiently knowing
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fact.
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, most of the time challenges and struggles bring valuable opportunities to
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to improve the standards of their lives. For
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reason, when they are dealing with
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, they should embrace and allow them for taking more steps
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instead
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of struggling with them.
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, if you have some economical
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, you can live with your family. At one point,
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overcome these
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by changing their job etc. and getting their own houses for living
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it seems a very common situation, it can be very difficult to make the necessary changes mostly.
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, it is essential for a growing
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that everybody find their own path and make the necessary changes. In my opinion, being patient and learning lessons build trustworthy relationships.
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, most supervisors expect their employees not to fall apart easily and tend to overcome these
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patiently. But, if you do not feel valued at your work despite meeting all the expectations,
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is the time for you to look for another opportunity. In conclusion,
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for handling
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situation and holding it, making necessary improvements and changes keep
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more active and alive.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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