You have invited to your friend’s wedding, which will take place in another country next month. Write a letter to the couple and say that you cannot attend. Explain why you are unable to come. Invite them to visit you after the wedding. Describe some activities you can do together when they visit.

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Dear Raman, I hope you and your family are in the best of your health. I received your marriage invitation yesterday and I am very happy for you and I wish you all the luck but

unfortunately

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I won't be able to attend the celebration because I am going to Mumbai for an annual surgery conference for the reason that organisers have invited me as a guest speaker. I will be back in a week's time and it would be great if you guys can plan to visit me after all the ceremonies are over.

Then

we could plan a vacation to Bali together that would not only give us a chance to spend some quality time with each other but we can enjoy a few activities like water sports, camping and wild excursions over there because I know how much you love to stay close to nature. I look forward to hearing from you on the same and waiting for a few ideas from you as well. Yours lovingly,

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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1Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

170 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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