You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of magazine. IN your letter • Correct the information in the article • Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information • Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

Dear Ms Lilian, I am your loyal magazine reader. Recently, I read your weekly travel journal which is on 15th May 2022 and found wrong information in a piece. In your article, the writer described the traditional authentic food and high-class luxury hotel that have not been found in the town of Kuching, Sarawak.
Firstly
, I would like to urge
this
argument because we do have our local authentic cultural food
such
as Sarawak Laksa, Sarawak Malaysian Dry noodles named Kolo Mee, which can be found in the city centre.
Moreover
, modern
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classic hotels can be able to find at everywhere in the city of Kuching. I am so surprised about
this
kind of mistake could be published in your article as your magazine is one of the well-known travel journals in Malaysia. For
this
point, I hope that you could make an amended article and
also
, an apology remark can be published in your
next
publication.
Furthermore
, the writer should ensure the facts that are true and accurate before it was published. Thank you. Regards, Man
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Rectify
  • Misrepresentation
  • Tourism
  • Editor
  • Credibility
  • Accuracy
  • Local heritage
  • Fact-checking
  • Repercussions
  • Counteractive measures
  • Publishing ethics
  • Clarification
  • Factual error
  • Misconception
  • Authenticity
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