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It is becoming more common to read the
news
online
,
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because we can access it easily on our computers or smartphones.
However
, I disagree with the statement that using the
Internet
is the best way to learn about the
news
every day. The reasons for my opinion are as follows.
First
, I believe that the
news
that we can read in newspapers or see on television will be more reliable. Nowadays on the
Internet
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many of the
news
stories that we see on social media will actually be spam or advertisements.
However
,
this
is unclear until you click on the story. On the same topic, fake
news
has been controversial recently. A lot of people share pictures or stories online that are false, but
unfortunately
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many people believe them. Because of
this
, the
Internet
is not as good for learning about the
news
because it is not as reliable. I
also
believe that reading the
news
online can be difficult to follow. Many online
news
websites or social media websites are full of advertisements or pop-up ads. They are
also
not well organized: it is difficult to find the
news
that you are looking for without using the 'search' bar. Sometimes, even when using the search option, relevant
news
is difficult to locate. Because newspapers and television have been around for so long, we already know how to find the
news
that is
relevant to us. Though it can be easy to access the
Internet
in many places, there are times when it is
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for example
, in the countryside,
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too far underground, or in a developing country. In these situations, the
Internet
may be unavailable to read the
news
.
Therefore
, there are a number of times when watching a TV or reading a newspaper would be the best way to read the
news
. So, online
news
is not the best option for everyone due to connectivity issues. Since more traditional methods of learning about the
news
such
as newspapers and television are trustworthy, well-organized, and easy to access, I believe that they are better than using the
Internet
.
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