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It is common for larger companies to require their staff to wear uniforms at all times. What are the benefits for a company of having a uniform? How can a uniform benefit the staff?

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Nowadays, every
companiesn
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companies
 obligatory of wearing uniforms,
there
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and there
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 are
variouse
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various
 benefits.
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, the organisation have easily
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identify
 and
secondly
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, the employees
creates
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positive
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 environment
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. I will explain
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 impact on both sides in the ensuing paragraphs.
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 with, there are plethora
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 of
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companies
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for companies
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. The
companies
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provides
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uniform
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 with their logo and identification so,
companies
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 easily
advesties
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advertise
adversities
 and they
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spand
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spend
stand
higher
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a higher
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 amount of money on advertisement another
benefits
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is
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are
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 particular wearing
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dress
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a dress
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 is showed unity and discipline
of
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in
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organization
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the organization
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.
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 ,
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the company
a company
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company
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companies
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 should
dress
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code
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codes
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 in
different
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a different
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field
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fields
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.
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, they easily recognise their work.
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, the Reliance
company
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also
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 provide
dress
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 code for
different
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a different
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 firm
such
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 as
,
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blue
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a blue
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 t-shirt with the jio logo , it is
communication
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a communication
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 and networking field. Red t-shirt with market logo, it is supermarket
uniform
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.
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, there are
also
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special
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a special
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dress
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 for
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company
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the company
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to
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apply
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employees . The corporation provides
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uniform
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uniforms
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 with safety.
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, workers
are
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save
thie
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their
 life
to
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harzard
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hazard
.
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, people mostly spend money on buying clothes offices and work.
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Companies
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Company
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The company
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 should compulsory
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uniform
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uniforms
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 for workers , they save money
of
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on
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 clothing.
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, the organisation mandatory to
wearing
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wear
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 customised
cloths
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clothes
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 that showed everyone is in the same position, they were not poor and rich.
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,
select
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selecting
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 garments for working place is very
time consuming
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time-consuming
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.
As a result
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,
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uniform
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uniforms
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 save
time
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the time
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of
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for
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 people. In conclusion, it is not only
advantages
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advantageous
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of
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for
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companies
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 to wear
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uniform
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uniforms
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 but
also
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, it has manifold
benefit
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benefits
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of
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for
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 staff members.
Morever
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Moreover
, workers can focus on their work because they do not need to worry about their clothes.
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