Many people today would argue that cinemas are becoming irrelevant due to new streaming services. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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mindset

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of different people. From the perspective of some people, they believe that cinema becomes less popular among populations because of the introduction of new OTT platforms.

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essay will not shed light only on both arguments but

also

my point of view will be elaborated in

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paragraphs. To commence with

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notion, there are numerous points to be shared where picture halls were being overpowered by digital services.

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of all, one subscription

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any platform can help us to enjoy the benefits of

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watch.

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, we can watch whole web series in one day during weekends.

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, it is possible to gain some monetary benefits by buying

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run.

On the other hand

, moving towards another argument of

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debate, with the incoming scenario of OTT platforms there is another issue of pirated websites detrimental effect of

this

platform is that they are not verified

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trusted websites,

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is always the risk of disclosing one's

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information. To add

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disagreement

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, while watching via streaming services either

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apply

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need to be connected by good internet connectivity or had downloaded before which

also

come along with other disruptions of downloading

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. To conclude, I strongly believe that cinema halls have their own advantages. People get a chance to change their daily environment around them by visiting there.

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to that, as

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of technology regarding 3D and 7D continuously

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, we can get new experiences through the picture halls.