People are surrounded by advertisement which has an increase effect on our lives. Do you think the positive effect of this outweigh the negative effects?
Advertisement
always had Fix the agreement mistake
Advertisements
impact
on peoples day to day life, it appeared Add an article
an impact
on
publicity, tv, public transport, Change preposition
in
malls
and today Correct word choice
and malls
its
influence Correct pronoun usage
their
raised
due to using smartphones, Add a missing verb
is raised
internet
and social media. Correct article usage
the internet
This
essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of increasing effect
of marketing.
On the one hand, Correct article usage
the effect
popularization
of marketing created Correct article usage
the popularization
competition
Correct article usage
a competition
game
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games
,
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apply
were
brands have to constantly improve Replace the word
where
characteristics
of their product to stay relevant. Correct article usage
the characteristics
Mobile
phones industries Correct article usage
The mobile
is
Change the verb form
are
on
of the biggest competitive field, where advertising has Correct your spelling
one
its
big role, causing companies Change the word
a
improve
their camera quality, capacity or life of the batteries. Other industries Add the particle
to improve
also
developed due to marketing, for example
, most of the construction companies in Kazakhstan improved their apartment complexes due to marketing strategies by adding baby carriages room in halls or making courtyards closed for strangers, basically
it didn't cause a Add a comma
,basically
lot
Add the preposition
oflot
pf
money, but it changes the perspective of costumers view.
Correct your spelling
of
On the other hand
, all of this
competition becoming
fake, when some brands do not improve their items and everything they change in product is the words, that describe Wrong verb form
becomes
same
thing and packaging. The main negative effect caused by Correct article usage
the same
advertizing
Correct your spelling
advertising
it
is excessive pricing. In big companies marketing is considered Correct pronoun usage
apply
as
the most expensive Change preposition
apply
departments
. Fix the agreement mistake
department
For example
, all of the expenses to
advertisements, which Change preposition
for
contains
influencers, billboards, social media, Correct subject-verb agreement
contain
PR
materials are included Correct word choice
and PR
on
the price of every item.
In conclusion, I agree that marketing has Change preposition
in
some
good impact on Correct determiner usage
a
peoples
life, it drives the competency between brands, Change noun form
people's
creates
numerous amount of jobs. But in point Correct word choice
and creates
were
it Correct your spelling
where
causing
prices to grow without developing Wrong verb form
causes
product
itself is a big disadvantage that Add an article
the product
outweigh
any advantages.Change the verb form
outweighs
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