When cars and cyclists use the same roads, there are often problems. Why is this the case? What are the solutions?

It has been universally accepted that the
problems
relating to the roads which are used by both
cars
and
bicycles
are escalating at an alarming rate. The
problems
are bringing a state of depression among the masses and in
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too. There are a plethora of reasons for the same and its possible solutions can be recommended too which are discussed as follows. In regard to the
problems
, the major reason which can be stated is the narrow streets which had been constructed to meet the needs of vehicles
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years ago. In support
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this
reason, a fact known is that the time has altered, and so did the number of
cars
and
bicycles
, but the wideness of mentioned streets remained unchanged.
This
has resulted in dreadful difficulties like
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jam
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, which in turn has led to
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considerable increase
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accidents. Another problematic cause is the undesirable difference between
cars
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and
bicycles
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bicycles'
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speed
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. It is evident that even the maximum possible speed of
bicycles
is still extremely lower than that of
the
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cars
. In
this
situation, the
cars
will have no option but to decrease their speed and
therefore
, new
problems
will rise. Seeing the issue with a brighter mind, many solutions can be helpful to curb
this
menace. One of the
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is
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the enhancement
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of roads’ infrastructures. In the support of
this
solution, it can be claimed that by the enlargement of previously mentioned streets,
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cyclists become capable of cycling near the street-pedestrian crossing boundary
instead
of cycling among the
cars
.
This
is a highly safer option for both
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cyclists and
the
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car drivers.
However
, speaking of safety,
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of wearing helmets and other
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cyclist
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by the government can be a practical solution.
Lastly
, not only does the introduction of bicycle lanes diminish a majority of difficulties, but
also
encourages more people to utilize bikes. So vital are the solutions, that I personally perceive
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should have been introduced earlier.
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