Some people store personal and private information online, including banking, contacts and addresses. Is it a positive or negative trend?

It is true that crucial

information

of Internet users is increasingly kept on the

website

. From my perspective,

this

tendency is completely beneficial. I will explain my preference in the following paragraphs. On the one hand, opponents of

this

topic in

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question have rational grounds.

First

,

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valuable

information

would be stolen by hackers with ease. To be specific, any current

website

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the Internet has gaps

on

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the

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security so users always face

the

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information

thief at any time.

Besides

, all of

information

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they stored is highly crucial and closely related to their assets and safety. If the

information

is distributed to the outside, not only them and

also

their families

are be

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in danger. Worse still, the kept

information

belongs

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to a head of state drives

this

country to red alert status,

all

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the economy and national security

is

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threatened. In fact, a well-known financial enterprise in Vietnam used to apologize to their customers and pay a significant amount of money for the bad guys when thieves hack

to

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firm’s

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website

and stole customers’

information

.

On the other hand

, the above arguments are insufficient to overshadow the merits of said matter.

First

and foremost, it is simple for the relatives of individuals who store

this

essential to be able to approach it in the necessary cases. To be elaborate, when a person has a serious accident or leads to a disease related to brain unpredictable,

such

as

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, their family members have difficulty in searching

his

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for his

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information

if he

jot

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it down

in

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paper or

remember

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it in

head

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.

In addition

,

this

trend would encourage the development of technology and data security. If more and more private

information

is stored on the Internet, technological firms will pay attention to

this

and invest their budget to expand and improve their products.

Furthermore

, the development of

this

field is able to have conducive impacts on both

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economic

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and technology of a nation. Thanks to it, the status of the country would be enhanced. In short, it is undeniable that both store

information

people and their

offsprings

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will be damaged about property and life when they accumulate precious

information

in

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the website

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website

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websites

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.

However

,

i

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still advocate

this

practice because their effective of it in sudden circumstances and it

encourage

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the development of many industries in society.