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Many animals are endangered. Some people argue that we should only protect animals that are useful to human. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is hard to deny that protecting
animals
 is a
hugh
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huge
high
finicial
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financial
 burden, as it consumed a great deal of money to develop scientists and build zoos or habitats.
Such
 a fact leads impressionable
people
 to generate the opinion that
people
 should only protect
animals
 that are valuable to
human
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.
However
,
such
 a statement suffers logical and factual fallacies and should be examined meticulously. As far as feasibility, environment, and economy are concerned, I firmly hold that we should NOT only protect useful
animals
.
First
 and foremost, the
throught
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thought
 of protecting useful
animals
 can not be executed in practice, as it is hard to determine what is useful. To be more specific,
people
 with different cultural or economical backgrounds may have
different
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definition
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 of useful;
thus
, it is hard to get a conclusion
of
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 which
animals
 can be useful to human beings. Not to mention that
,
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 some
people
 argue
human
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humans
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 have no moral right to decide which
species
 can survive.
Furthermore
, the fact that
species
 diversity is important for every
animals
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 indicates that we ought to protect all
the
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animals
. Take the case of the changes in China in the late 20th -
people
 at that time
regard
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 some
species
 like
rat
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rats
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 are harmful,
thus
 the government encourage
people
 to eliminate
this
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species
, reducing the
species
 diversity, and leading to a huge impact on the environment. Had it not been for
this
camipagn
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campaign
, we would have a better environment.
Nevertheless
, a voice arises that protecting all the endangered
animals
 will be a
fincial
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financial
 burden. Ironically, we can earn more from protecting
animals
, we can get money from tourists to zoos or habitats, and
people
 can advance medical and scientific research
by
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 some
species
, helping many
people
 to cure their diseases, which
saving
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 a
lot
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 money. In a
nut shell
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, I maintain that we should NOT only
the
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 useful
species
. Admittedly, as my
favorite
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 quote from James Madison goes, as long as the reason of man continues
fallible
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, different opinions will be formed, and some
people
 may oppose me.
However
, I believe they will compromise after being exposed to my article.
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