Nowadays,many people choose to be self-employed,rather than to work for a company or organisation.Do the advantages of being self-employed outweigh the disadvantages?

These days, being
self employed
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has been chosen by a great number of
people
more than being hired in
a
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office or organization.
this
issue has several reasons and there are some drawbacks
in
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working for
ownself
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yourself
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that in
this
essay, I will reveal them. Recently, the number of
people
who
works
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work
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seperately
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separately
from a company has increased because,
firstly
, the salary of being a member of an
onrganization's
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organisation's
staff is considerably lower than the boss. So, in order to achieve high
wage
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wages
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, individuals prefer
work
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to work
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freelance or
remote
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remotely
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.
For example
, a graphic designer in a studio even
by
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apply
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working on various projects in a month will be bad-paid
comparing
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with what he has done.
Secondly
,
people
always complain about their
administers
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administrators
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and colleagues, they can not stand being in a place with some annoying
persons
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people
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. following up, they
work
in their houses
by
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a laptop far away from those mentioned
people
.
Despit
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Despite
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fact that working freelance has many benefits, several disadvantages
have
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.
To begin
with,
people
who do not
work
in a factory or company, cannot have assurance which is entirely beneficial for every
workers
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worker
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.
by
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having
a
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good assurance
people
are able to use many services
such
as medicine and hospital at reasonable costs.
In addition
,
emplyeers
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employees
employers
of any organization are being given perks and advantages during
working
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the working
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year. They can have loans and financial aid for buying
house
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a house
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or car.
For instance
, in
MVM
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an MVM
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car factory, all the
labors
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labourers
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after working
two
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for two
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years loyalty will be
abe
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able
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to purchase one of the vehicles
15
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at 15
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% below the real value. Actually, freelancers have to
work
and
safe
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save
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their money more to have those facilities.
To sum up
, many
emplyeers
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employees
employers
leave their
work
to
work
seperately
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separately
to have
better
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a better
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income and
work
from their
comfort-zone
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comfort zone
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,
However
, they would not be able to utilize workers' benefits as much as employed
people
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • autonomy
  • work-life balance
  • earning potential
  • job satisfaction
  • financial risk
  • irregular income
  • job security
  • financial instability
  • benefits
  • health insurance
  • paid leave
  • retirement plans
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