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With a growing world population, many people believe that we should focus on producing more GM foods. What are the advantages and disadvantages of doing this?

#world #population #people #focus #gm #foods
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POPULATION ARE DRAMATICALLY RISING IN THE WORLD. SO, SCIENTISTS ARE FINDING MORE WAY FOR FEEDING FOR THEM IN A LIFE AND SOME OF THE WAY IS NOT NATURAL. I BELIEVE THAT IT IS
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 GOOD AND EFFECTIVE IN SOME POINTS. ON THE POSITIVE SIDE, AGRICULTURAL LAND IS CUTTING DAY BY DAY WITH THE INCREASING POPULATION AND CHANGING THE WAY OF LIVING WITH THE MODERN ERA.
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, PEOPLE MAY BECOME THE PROBLEMS WITH FOOD ON A DAILY BASIS. IF GENETICALLY food toHAS BE STARTED TO PRODUCED, THEY WILL BE MORE USEFUL FOR HUMANS AND OTHER SPECIES.
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, PEOPLE HAVE BEEN STARTING TO EAT MORE MEAT THAN
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 CENTURY, AND AS A CONSEQUENCE,
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 IS DIRECTLY EFFECT TO WORLD REGULAR CYCLE. WE ARE DEPENDING ON EACH OTHER,
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FOODS
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 ARE THE BEST OPTION FOR STABILISING THE NORMAL CYCLE OF ALL EARTH SPECIES.
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 MAY NOT HAVE THE SAME NUTRITIONS AS NATURALLY GROWN
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. MANY SOURCES ARE USED TO GROW NATURAL
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. LIKE, FERTILIZER, SUN,WATER, AND AIR . WHEN
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 NON NATURALLY FOOD WE CAN NOT GIVE TO THEM.
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 , THERE IS A NUMBER OF CHANCES OF RISING DISEASES IN THE HUMAN BODY.
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, NATURAL
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 NEED TO A TIME FOR GROWING, AND ALL NUTRIATIONS COME IN DIFFERENT WAYS, IN THE
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 , NUTRITIONS WILL BE ADDED BY US AND
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 MADE BY US. THEY ARE MORE CHANCES TO MAKE UNSTABLE OUR BODY CYCLE WITH
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 THAN NATURALLY. IN CONCLUSION , PEOPLE NEED TO TRY CONTROL TO EXPAND IN THEIR NEW CONSTRUCTION OR MODERNISATION AND SAVE LAND FOR AGRICULTURE.
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 , GOVERNMENT NEED TO MAKE SOME STEP TO INCREASE GROWING CROPS IN NATURALLY THAN ARTIFICIALLY.
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