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Some people believe that one-on-one lessons are better for learning while others think that group lessons are superior. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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people
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attitude
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attitudes
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for
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 learning lessons. While it is stated by some
people
 that learning by private teachers has a great
efieciency
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efficiency
deficiency
, other believe being in a group to be taught is better. In
this
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However
, I agree with
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later
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 statement. A number of
people
 believe in learning lessons
into
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 a one-to-one class because they think it can affect positively
on
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the student.
To begin
 with, when
students
 are alone with
teacher
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the teacher
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, they have more time to delve into problems, and following
this
teacher
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In addition
, the
amount
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 of distractions in
this
 kind of
classes
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 are considerably low,
which
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 the mentioned student is able to focus on
subject
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 more.
For example
, in a private course, the pupil cannot be distracted by other
students
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students'
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 conversations or actions.
On the contrary
,
as a result
, group classes have shown better
outcome
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outcomes
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.
Firstly
,
human
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humans
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 tend to share knowledge and information with each other,
which
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 we can
be
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witness
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a witness
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of
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this
 practice in
the
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group classes.
For example
, in a scientific field
that
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 the number of data is considerably high,
students
 add their info in order to
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with
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 it or inform other
students
 about different aspects of that field.
Secondly
, when
students
 are with
other
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others
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,
teacher
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the teacher
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 can hold a competition among them, which is a good method for teaching.
By
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this
 approach, the more
studnts
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students
compet
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compete
 with each
othe
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other
, the more information
are
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 transferred.
For instance
, in my previous university, our professor would launch a game every
sunday
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 about finding
a
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 appropriate movement in nature to be inspired
with
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 designers. to sum up,
although
 being
in
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alone with
teacher
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the teacher
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 can tackle several issues, being in a course
next
 to other
people
 can bring more benefits
such
 as increasing data and having fun.
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