Some people believe that one-on-one lessons are better for learning while others think that group lessons are superior. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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learning lessons. While it is stated by some
people
that learning by private teachers has a great
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efficiency
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, other believe being in a group to be taught is better. In
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statement. A number of
people
believe in learning lessons
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a one-to-one class because they think it can affect positively
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the student.
To begin
with, when
students
are alone with
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the teacher
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, they have more time to delve into problems, and following
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teacher
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In addition
, the
amount
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of distractions in
this
kind of
classes
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are considerably low,
which
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the mentioned student is able to focus on
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more.
For example
, in a private course, the pupil cannot be distracted by other
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conversations or actions.
On the contrary
,
as a result
, group classes have shown better
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outcomes
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.
Firstly
,
human
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tend to share knowledge and information with each other,
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we can
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witness
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of
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practice in
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group classes.
For example
, in a scientific field
that
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the number of data is considerably high,
students
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it or inform other
students
about different aspects of that field.
Secondly
, when
students
are with
other
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,
teacher
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the teacher
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can hold a competition among them, which is a good method for teaching.
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this
approach, the more
studnts
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students
compet
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compete
with each
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other
, the more information
are
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transferred.
For instance
, in my previous university, our professor would launch a game every
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about finding
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appropriate movement in nature to be inspired
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designers. to sum up,
although
being
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alone with
teacher
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the teacher
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can tackle several issues, being in a course
next
to other
people
can bring more benefits
such
as increasing data and having fun.
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