Your find that your study load is too heavy. Write a letter to your college teacher explaining why you need to withdraw from two courses. Ask if it is possible to obtain a refund. You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

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Dear Madam, I am writing

this

letter in request to remove me from two courses for

this

semester. As you might know already, I have twelve courses enrolled for

this

year-end activity and it is getting really hard to focus on all subjects. I would like to be eliminated from social science and environment studies. My workload for getting other subjects' homework completed is

also

getting affected due to many course enrollments. Along with it, I'm working part-time to compensate for my college fee. Managing classes, work and studies

are

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getting highly complicated every day and I would require your help in withdrawing my application from two of these subjects.

Also

, is it possible to have the refund of my course fee paid ? Because I can use that money to accommodate other subject fees. Can you please provide your support in withdrawing my applications and will wait for your response. Your's obediently, Emma

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

154 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Your find that your study load is too heavy. Write a letter to your college teacher explaining why you need to withdraw from two courses. Ask if it is possible to obtain a refund. You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The Closing

Many major cities today are becoming bigger and more crowded. Why is this happening? What measures can be taken to solve this problem?

Small town center shops are running out of business because rural residents tend to go shopping in big cities store. To what extent do the disadvantages of this development outweigh the advantages?

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As a country develops, more people are able to purchase a car. Do you think that the positive for the individual outweigh the negatives for the environment?