Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

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These days, and more than ever, many
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are in danger of going extinct.
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is a major problem not just for the
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but can
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affect the ecosystem and result in even more extinction events. There are many reasons why
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is happening,
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, there is a great number of solutions we can do to stop it. There are many factors why some
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of
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are reduced in numbers. One reason is the hunting and killing of endangered
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.
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is considered by most the main factor for many extinction events in the past.
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, many tiger
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have gone extinct because people feared them so they started to hunt them using dogs and firearms. Another reason is the loss of forests and
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in areas around the world,
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, birds need
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to rest after flying for a long, and they
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need
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to make a place to lay their eggs. if we destroy the forest many bird
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will be affected harshly by it. For these ,reasons
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are finding it hard to live and hunt and reproduce. We can solve
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problem by taking many easy steps. One would be is to pass laws that punish anyone killing endangered
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by imposing heavy fines or even prison time.
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, passing laws against cutting
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and clearing forests by
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most of which care more about profit than the environment. Another solution is to allocate
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large areas of land for these
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to live without interference from humans.
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was done any many countries and is producing
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good results.
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, teaching young kids about these
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and how to protect them,
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, we must teach them about the effect of our actions on the environment. All these solutions are simple but effective in solving
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issue. In conclusion, animal extinction is a serious problem that we all have to work together to solve,
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, there are a lot of easy fixes but we must be willing to do it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • species extinction
  • endangered animals
  • biodiversity
  • habitat loss
  • deforestation
  • urbanization
  • poaching
  • illegal wildlife trade
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • conservation efforts
  • legislation
  • enforcement
  • human overpopulation
  • sustainable development
  • responsible consumption
  • education
  • awareness programs
  • protected areas
  • wildlife reserves
  • international cooperation
  • collaboration
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