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People shopping depend more on age group they belong to than other factors to what extent do you agree or disagree.

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youngters
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youngsters
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 nowadays are getting more shopaholics compared to the past. folk are following the latest trends to compete with others. Well, shopping depends upon a particular
age
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 group, as young
people
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 like to do more shopping. I will discuss both these views in the upcoming paragraph. To commence with, we can see that young
people
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 nowadays do more shopping compared to other
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people
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. Young
people
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 know more about trends from a variety of social media, and
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 at their,
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 they like to wear fashionable
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.
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, as teenagers are in schools and colleges, where they have to wear different
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, so as they are young in their college days, so obviously, they are going to do more shopping. To end up with, young
people
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 are more attracted to fashion, as soon as new trends come on the market, they eagerly want to buy things, rather than seeing their price tags or any other thing.
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, it really does not depend upon
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, shopping
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 depends on one individual's financial capacity, as if they belong to wealthy families, they will do more shopping.
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, after a certain
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 like after fifty, the interest of
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 get decreased
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 old
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 think that it is a complete waste of money, and
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 some believe that wearing fashionable
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 does not show their status. To sum up, with I completely agree with the statement that, shopping depends upon the particular
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 group and basically adults like to wear different kinds of
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 compared to older community
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