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In the past, people ate local, in-season food, but now, people tend to consume out- of-season food from different parts of the world. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Our ancestors had to try hard to become able to provide
food
 for every meal. They had no option of picking up a
take-away
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takeaway
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 but they would mostly collect
food
 from their own gardens and farms. Nowadays processes
such
 as globalization and
industralization
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industrialization
industrialisation
 enabled us to freely come to the supermarket and buy all kinds of
food
, no matter the season or its origin. Is
this
 comfort a
privilage
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privilege
 or
a
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harm to
todays’
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today’s
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 generations?
To begin
 with, one who was picking up
seosanal
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seasonal
food
 from one’s own garden, was secure of the
food
 source.
In other words
,
people
 knew how the
food
 was treated,
with
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and with
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 what kind of chemicals.
Food
 was collected in season meaning that it grew naturally and that it was mostly eaten right
awa
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away
Consequently
, even the
food
 choice was narrowed,
people
 had no chance of consuming
low quality
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low-quality
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, industrially made
food
,
such
 as fast
food
.
On the other hand
, it
seams
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seems
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 to me that
people
 would de facto work as farmers and gardeners just to provide
food
 for themselves which demanded a great amount of time and energy.
Therefore
, supermarkets are expeditiously saving us time. Not only that but
also
 we can easily try new
food
. For
this
reason
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 we can explore new tastes and
also
 make our meal plan more diverse. In conclusion,
people
 in the past ate local, not chemically treated
food
 but they had to work hard in order to provide it.
Nowdays
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Nowadays
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,
people
 should try to buy local, keeping an eye on
food
 origin but
also
 its variety.
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