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Writing Samples
Band 6.5

You have missed some important papers accidentally in a taxi.Write a letter to the manager of the Taxi company. In your letter: Give the details of your journey Explain why those papers are important for you Suggest what can the manager do

Dear Sir, I am writing
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 to inform you that I forgot my important documents in a
taxi
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 which works for your company. I was travelling from the City Center to Downtown on a
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 number LF-753,
however
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, when it dropped me off I could not remember to my files with me. The
taxi
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 just
drive
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 off and after a few minutes, I realised I
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 not have my papers in my hands. I was going to take an interview at a firm for a new job and for that purpose that file contained my previous job experiences and degrees.
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, they hold significance to me. I cannot apply for any job without them. I would appreciate it if you could locate that
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 and ask its driver if he still
had
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has
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 my documents. Or if you could contact all the passengers who boarded after me, that would be a great help. I
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 be very grateful to you if you could look into
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 matter at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Leo

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Consider providing more details about the journey, such as the time and date, to enhance clarity.
coherence and cohesion
Try to improve the logical flow between sentences to strengthen coherence in your letter.
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Use a more formal tone in certain parts for better professionalism, especially when explaining the importance of the documents.
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Good use of polite language and overall tone of the letter.
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Clear explanation of the documents' importance and the potential consequences of losing them.
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