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Museums and art galleries should concentrate on local works rather than showing the cultures or artworks from other countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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As arts have always been an essential part of
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human civilization, museums and
art
 galleries play a central role
of
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 promoting
art works
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artworks
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 to the public. While some people argue that local
art
 pieces should be the focus of those facilities, I do believe that the advantages of displaying international artworks outweigh the disadvantages.
To begin
 with, no boundaries
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 in
art
.
Firstly
, many
master pieces
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 of
art
 in
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history do
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 belong to
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 area. They are priceless pressures for the entire human society.
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 telling example is the well-known painting Sun Flower
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 Van Gogh as I do not think that it belongs to one particular country.
Instead
, everyone is eligible to see the work.
Secondly
,
usually
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 the meaning behind an artwork is universal. There should be no problem for people to understand and appreciate the work.
Finally
,
art
 can be educational. People, especially youngsters, can learn
culture
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 from different places around the world.
On the other hand
, exhibiting multi-culture paintings, sculptures, or other
art
 forms has various benefits to museums and
art
galleries’
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galleries
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 business in which those objects could generate
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 more
interests
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 from the local public. It is a norm that attention equals
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money,
therefore
 more profit can be made from hosting
such
 exhibitions.
In addition
, not only the money can be used to prepare more exhibitions, but authorities could
also
 leverage the opportunity to educate their citizens about
art
 appreciation. To conclude, I would strongly oppose the idea of limiting artworks based on the location of a museum or
art
 gallery.
On the contrary
, promoting international artists and their artworks should be encouraged.
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