Nowadays many young people are not interested in reading the newspapers and watching new on television. Give reasons for this and proffer solution to this problem.

These days, the popularity of
newspapers
and TV news programs
have
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decreased among
th
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the
youth.
This
issue has several reasons.
However
, it can be tackled by a number of solutions.
As a result
, youngsters show less attention to
follow
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new channels and even reading magazines and articles printed on
papers
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paper
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.
To begin
with, the role of technology should be pinpointed. Thanks to
high tech
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products,
new
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generation
have
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the
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great tendency to read online-based books and articles. Because they are more convenient than traditional ways.
For example
, the Internet has provided various platforms which are being updated every
minutes
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, so,
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the reader
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reader
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readers
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can be informed faster than
reading
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the
newspapers
.
In addition
, television
do
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not cover all
interested
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fields
such
as
scientific
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projects and introducing advanced technologies. Actually, the correspondents on television always focus on politics and
economy
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, whose
the
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youth cannot stand
them
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for a long time. To increase the rate of reading paper-based information,
Firstly
, newspaper offices should include interesting subjects and update their information more quickly like twice per day.
However
, replacing
papers
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by
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digital screens is environmentally friendly.
Secondly
, the administrators of news channels must consider different subjects, which are attractive
for
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the
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young people.
Moreover
, they can produce programs specialized for
the
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youngsters.
For instance
, I have seen some of them in foreign languages on TV that
were
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customized for
the
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young
persons
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people
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. To sum up, the latest news
are
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is
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followed through the Internet because the pace of updating information
are
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faster compared to
newspapers
, and TV shows do not cover interesting data. So,
newspapers
can be printed in different versions and channels
regard
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regarding
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more suitable programs for
the
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youngsters.
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