In many countries large amounts of food are wasted. Why do you think people waste food in this way? What can be done to reduce the amount of food thrown away?

Nowadays, there is growing
concern
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about
food
waste
comparing
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to the recent
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past
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when
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controversial
impoverishment still left
profound
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influence on
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of
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society. In
this
essay, I will approach the significant issue from various
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as well as put forward some
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to minimize the drawback of
food
excessive. The most common
reasson
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reason
for the current problem is
definietly
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definitely
overconsumed crops. The
number of
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food
demand is
ingcreasingly
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increasingly
developed
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, bringing out
a
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upward trend in
food
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the food
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supply in both quality and quantity.
The productivity
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is
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day-by-day and gradually beyond the overall consumer principle
go
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with low cost of necessary
type
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types
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of
staple
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staples
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.
This
enabled people to buy
excessive
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an excessive
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amount
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amounts
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of
food
with out
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without
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correspondent
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expectation
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.
This
is
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issue.
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I will point out some
methodology
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to prevent or lessen the
consquence
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consequence
consequences
of the problem. In
genral
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general
tendency, more and more people tend to give away
there
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excessive
staple
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throughout
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donation
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. Foood will be sent out to the whole world. Every place suffering heavily from famine or lacking
of
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necessary
producitivity
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productivity
.
Beside
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,
well-trained
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in restored
food
and preservation
technique
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also
bring
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tremendous
advantage
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advantages
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for
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human kind
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humankind
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. The
up to date
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techinique
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technique
techniques
utilize
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brine
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by brine
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or
vinegarr
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vinegar
vinegars
are
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alloww
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allow
allows
us to make
staple
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staples
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last
longer as
it
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feature
instedead
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instead
of wasting
such
an precise crops
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precise crops
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. To sum up, there
are
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plenty of
legtimate
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legitimate
reassojn
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reasons
for
foood
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food
waste.
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, it is
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undeniable
human
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is
decisve
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decisive
factor
contrubite
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contribute
contributed
to huge scathing annually in various kind of aspect.
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