Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects the on society?

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Undeniably, in contemporary days,
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take less interest in
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subjects. These problems occur all around the globe. Plenty of reasons aggravate
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menace. The individuals will
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because
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plays a vital role in society. The primary problem is associated with
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competition. There is a lot of competition in the
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field. Most of the
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avoid taking part in the
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line.
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think that
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provides fewer opportunities compared to other subjects.
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, Oxford University take interviews
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and questions them what is their favourite
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?, and most
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answer
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question is Arts. Because of easiest
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and less time-consuming
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and provide many opportunities. Another issue is that
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is the most costly
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many
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can not afford the
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stream. In India, one student needs almost 50lacs Indian rupees in a single year to learn
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at a good university. Owing to
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, youngsters go to other countries for
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, and most families can't pay for
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subjects because of the high cost.
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affects a civilization.
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provides many good technologies for society and makes easy life and without
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, our survival will be impossible. Another cause is that medical
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because
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plays a crucial role in the medical lines, and
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developed impossible medicines for harmful diseases. Owing to
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that's why people live a long life. To cite an example, In the covid period when society suffering from corona and that time
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comes
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aid facilities, and
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developed the injection of the corona to curb
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issue. To conclude, after the discussion, I am of the opinion that high cost and provide fewer opportunities that's why
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take less interest in
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. But, without
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cannot live because
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provides them with technology and medical facilities and make easier life
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • deter
  • promotion
  • opportunities
  • role models
  • lucrative
  • employment
  • gender stereotypes
  • societal norms
  • access to information
  • technological stagnation
  • shortage
  • skilled professionals
  • innovation
  • healthcare sector
  • workforce
  • global competitiveness
  • advancements
  • economic growth
  • public health services
  • environmental sciences
  • combat climate change
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