Nowadays, people can live and work anywhere they want because of the development of communication technology and transport. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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undeniable
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world each and every people love to
work
from a basic stay and they do not like to
work
outside and because of
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in technologies individuals use to get
work
at their own home and they imagine to complete in specific
time
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some
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and cons of
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and do
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from anywhere but
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of all I would like to explain about
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benefits
and
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then after
drawback in
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essay . To commence with and the very
first
advantage is , nowadays pupils do not get
time
for their kith
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and
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because
of
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reason
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choose
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to
work
from home and ample of international companies offer
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work
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or
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.
Furthermore
, every
individuals
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can do
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at
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their own
time
and they can
also
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myriad
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from
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loved
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.
Nonetheless
, in recent
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covud
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cold
virus and because of
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updation
in technology human beings has got a plethora of help and
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invention
also
help to secure
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life .
For Instance
, in the year
2019
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a huge pandemic year was going and around 45% of
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the nation
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nation
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poplation
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population
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fetal death because of
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and
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in that
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situation
formulation has helped in
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way .
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we seldom give a thought to
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over
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side of the essay there are
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a few
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disadvantage
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of technology . Mankind
do
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not give
time
for themself
also
they get
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type of infection by using mobiles for typing .
Moreover
,
man
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men
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/woman get depend on
technologies
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technology
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they do not
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their own body to do toil .
Last
but not the least ,
persons
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get
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of
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smartphone
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and other things . To cite an
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, as per
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article published in "THE HUFFINGTON POST" 90
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of people do not wake up without phones in their
hand
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hands
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. To Conclude , using automation is good for our
mind
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minds
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but
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the goverment
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goverment
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government
should
also
make
somestrict
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some strict
rule
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that people are not
alowwed
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allowed
to use machinery all the
time
they
also
have to do
there
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their
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own
work
by
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own
by not depending on other things .
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