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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
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Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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