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What do you think is the most important element of a perfect society in the modern world? How can people work towards achieving an ideal society?

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It is no doubt that everyone wants to live in a perfect world, in which all of us can enjoy a better life. There are various aspects that play central roles in building the ideal
society
.
To begin
 with,
the
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 good
environment
 is one of the most critical goals
society
 must achieve. Not only people are strongly impacted by their surroundings, but the economy
also
 relies rely on
the
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 stable and balanced
environment
, in terms of
agricultural
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, manufacturing and more. To ensure
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progress
of
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 improving
natural
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environment
, we need to promote the usage of green energy,
such
 as wind power and nuclear power.
In addition
, normal people can contribute to reducing carbon footprints by taking more public transportation and carrying reusable shopping bags
instead
 of
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plastic ones.
Furthermore
, safety is essential to any residents of the
society
, which means a low crime rate. To reduce
occurrence
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 rate of crimes, governments can make a great impact by putting funding into
education
. Poverty and crime go hand in hand most of the time, and the best way to help poor citizens get away from the lower class is through
education
. Authorities can establish reliable and cheap internet access systems, in
this
 way, young children can at least access digital lectures and classes so that basic knowledge can be passed along to them.
Finally
, human rights are equally important to the world. The sense of freedom has been there ever since human civilization exists. In
this
 case,
education
 is the key again.
For instance
, the success of establishing equal rights between men and women depends on
continuous
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 determined effort. We need to cultivate the mindset early and carry it over multiple generations through the
education
 system. To conclude, creating an ideal
society
 is not easy. I believe we can make positive movements by focusing on the
environment
, safety and human rights.
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