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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is the positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because
people
 are able to buy the same products anywhere in the
world
. Do you think
this
 is
the
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 positive or negative
development
? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. With the advent of Technology in the travel industry,
specially
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 in air travel
world
 has become a global village. With
this
 globalisation the trade of almost every type of could has become much
simplar
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simpler
,
that
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 has led
to
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the
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people
 to find things in every market of the
world
 which
were
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 earlier limited to a specific part of the
world
. It is
of
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an
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argued whether
this
development
 has
the
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 positive impact or
negative
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 one. In my opinion,
this
 is
the
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 clearly positive
development
 both for an individual and a country. For
long
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 time
any
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people
 were underwear of
the
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certain technology is that were being used in a limited part of the
world
.
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instance
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 Samsung a technology company that develops and sells most electronic items
had
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developed a machine which could clean and wash clothes using ultraviolet rays
instead
 of water.
This
 machine was available in Korea where the headquarters of
company
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the company
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are
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 situated only. For some
people
 living in
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areas where
available
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 of water is,
availability
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the availability
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 of
this
 device would have prone quite beneficial. And another reason
that's
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 sports
that
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view
of
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positive
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the positive
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development
 of products
availability
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 in different parts of
world
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the world
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 is that
the
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people
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toknow
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know
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now
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 find their native things in any part of
world
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the world
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.
For
instance
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 it is observed that the students who live alone in India like to eat Maggi;
and
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an
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 economic and
time saving
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 option, which was not available in some European countries
such
 as UK Germany etc now as it's available there
also
 student sim quite happy about it. To conclude if the products are available in all parts of the
world
, there will be more demand and it can boost
economy
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the economy
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 of countries by increasing
the
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Exports.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • globalization
  • diversity
  • homogenization
  • cultural assimilation
  • global connection
  • local businesses
  • economic impact
  • consumerism
  • standardization
  • westernization
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