in some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from healthy problem as a result of eating too much fast food. it is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extend do you agree or disagree ?

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of consuming too much ready-made

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has been receiving increasing attention recently.

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, it is suggested that governments ought to impose a high tax on fast

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of the idea that

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proposition does not deem to be effective. The nutrition culture in

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society, directly and indirectly, is connected to a variety of aspects

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as one's personality and dietary habits. What is meant by

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is that asking citizens for a higher amount of tax simply results in shifting from higher quality

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with fewer nutrient ingredients.to clarify, if a person consumes fast

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on a daily basis and is used to having said

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, when faced with higher price ranges, prefers to opt for an option which cost the same as before, but

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time, the quality of

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has decreased lower than before.to set an example, a hot dog has a lower nutritional value than a beef sandwich or a pepperoni. But, when one sees the increase, decide to choose an item fixed to their budget, and there is no need to mention that said

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, can have even more detrimental effects on their well-being in the long run. Another point to be taken into consideration is that financial aspects are not all for people of society. Nowadays, they have to work longer shifts and even are having two jobs just to make ends meet, in simple terms,

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may not even have the time nor the condition to have ready-made

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on a regular basis.to illustrate, numerous people are working as taxi drivers or jobs that occupy most of their time on the street.

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, combined with the fact that homemade cuisine bought from caterings normally comes with a higher price tag, pushes

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towards ingesting "takeaway culture". In a way of conclusion, establishing said tax rule, not only prevents the people of society from consuming

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a more nutritious diet but oppositely, leans them towards a poor diet.