Some people believe that professionals such as doctors and engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Should domestically trained specialists in areas

such

as medicine and engineering be obliged to pursue their careers in their homeland or should they be given the choice of working abroad? In

this

essay, I shall discuss both sides of

this

controversial issue before going on to state why I tend to agree with the need for them to remain in their

countries

at least in the short term. Those in favour of making graduates from these highly skilled professions stay and work in the country where they studied, often stress that the cost of higher education in many

countries

is subsidised by taxpayers and that thanks to government funding, talented students from any background will be able to realise their potential. The argument,

therefore

, is that these alumni owe a debt of gratitude to the society that helped them.

Furthermore

, in many developing

countries

, the need to maximize all available resources, including the human variety, is of the utmost importance. These

countries

cannot afford to lose

such

valuable talent, especially after investing in it.

However

, there are many who believe that it must be left to the individual to choose whether to stay or relocate to another country. After devoting years of their lives to study while perhaps neglecting personal relationships and running up considerable debt, seeking opportunities elsewhere to enjoy a better lifestyle and earn a higher salary as well as the chance to

further

their academic and professional careers, should not be denied.

Besides

, if there are no restrictions on people from other walks of life,

such

as those in business or even the arts

such

as music, dance and acting, from migrating,

then

why should doctors and engineers be prevented?

However

further

their academic and professional careers, should not be denied.

Besides

, if there are no restrictions on people from other walks of life,

such

as those in business or even the arts

such

as music, dance and acting, from migrating,

then

why should doctors and engineers be prevented?

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

392 words

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professionals
doctors
engineers
required
training
home country
cultural
linguistic
advantages
economic impact
free
another country
globalization
international collaboration
improving
skills
knowledge
experience
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