Task 1 A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear Dave, I hope
this
letter finds you well. Please, feel free to write
me
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here
any
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time if you have any questions. Thank you for helping with my puppy. As I
sad
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before
depature
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departure
I am working
with
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getting all
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permision
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permission
permissions
ducument
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for taking
in
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my Napoleon to me in Canada. It could take much
time
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than thought before. Hi is
very
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nice pet. I just ask you to take care
for
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Nappy with on-time feeding two times a
day
and walking after 5pm every
day
. You can find his dry meal under the table in
a
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kitchen. I signed every portion for the
next
fourteen days. You just need to combine these with one portion of fresh meat which I ask you to bring every
day
. Does not matter in which part of
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day
you will feed him. I will send you money for
this
soon.In a corner
next
to
fridge
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is staying water box. Please, don't
forget
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remain enough water there when you leave
house
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for the night. And the
last
one, try to wash Nappy's carpet in
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laundry every five days. He sleeps better
then
. You sincerely,
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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