increased in large cities day to day.
, it leads to serious issues after which
environmentCorrect article usage
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will suffer due to
. The objective of
essay is to examine
problems as land
and air deterioration, and
propose a number of ways to tackle the
.
One of the
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of over-
is the easy way to catch an infection which
resultingWrong verb form
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in
illnessFix the agreement mistake
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,
as asthma, heart attacks,
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.
, be allowed extinction of animals due to land
,
it Correct pronoun usage
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can lead to sand erosion.
Many countries are where
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an encounter
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these issues,
theirCorrect word choice
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government placed a strong emphasis on air deterioration. There is
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demanding solution
ofChange preposition
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thatCorrect pronoun usage
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is promoting
aChange the article
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electric
vehicleFix the agreement mistake
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. Using electric cars that do not rely on fossil fuels can decrease the amount of
and so we are contributing
theChange preposition
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atmosphere.
, individuals can tackle
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problemFix the agreement mistake
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land deterioration, people should keep clean in public places and on a nature
vacationFix the agreement mistake
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.
,
stateCorrect article usage
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of nature will improve and
itChange the pronoun
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government takes control of
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of nature
people will get used to
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up after themselves everywhere.
In conclusion, governments and simple people can take responsibility for the cleanliness of the environment. Our society should understand that over-
has negative consequences.