Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.

Pollution

increased in large cities day to day.

Therefore

, it leads to serious issues after which

environment

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the environment

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will suffer due to

pollution

. The objective of

this

essay is to examine

such

problems as land

pollution

and air deterioration, and

also

propose a number of ways to tackle the

problem

. One of the

first

problem

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problems

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of over-

pollution

is the easy way to catch an infection which

resulting

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results

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in

illness

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illnesses

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,

such

as asthma, heart attacks,

pneumonia

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and pneumonia

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.

Likewise

, be allowed extinction of animals due to land

pollution

,

also

it

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apply

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can lead to sand erosion. Many countries are where

encounter

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an encounter

the encounter

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with

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apply

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these issues,

their

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and their

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government placed a strong emphasis on air deterioration. There is

the

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a

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demanding solution

of

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to

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this

problem

that

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which

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is promoting

a

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an

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electric

vehicle

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vehicles

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. Using electric cars that do not rely on fossil fuels can decrease the amount of

pollution

and so we are contributing

the

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to the

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atmosphere.

In addition

, individuals can tackle

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the problem

a problem

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problem

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problems

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with

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of

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land deterioration, people should keep clean in public places and on a nature

vacation

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vacations

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.

Next

,

state

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the state

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of nature will improve and

it

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its

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government takes control of

cleanliness

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the cleanliness

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of nature

then

people will get used to

clean

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cleaning

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up after themselves everywhere. In conclusion, governments and simple people can take responsibility for the cleanliness of the environment. Our society should understand that over-

pollution

has negative consequences.