People’s shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than on other factors. To what extent you agree or disagree.
It is true that the age group of consumers can impact their shopping
behavior
. I argue it would be a mistake to think it Change the spelling
behaviour
outweigh
other factors. Change the verb form
outweighs
such
as Correct article usage
the wealthy
wealthy
level and social influence.
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wealth
To begin
with, the amount
of wealth Change the quantifier
number
people
owned has certainly an essential role associated with consumption
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consumer
behavior
. There are many aspects of the product Change the spelling
behaviour
people
has
to consider when they make a purchase decision, Correct subject-verb agreement
have
for instance
, price
, quality, appearance, etc. People
from rich
background is considered less Add an article
the rich
price sensitive
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price-sensitive
compare
with poverty. Wrong verb form
compared
On the contrary
, poor people
is
mostly driven by Change the verb form
are
price
, which means when choosing between the same type of products in
different Change preposition
at
price
, someone who has weak financial background would choose to go for the cheaper one. Therefore
, shopping habits have more to do with people
’s wealthy
level.
Replace the word
wealth
Furthermore
, peer influence is equally critical in terms of purchasing products. Human
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The human
A human
being
as Fix the agreement mistake
beings
social
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a social
animal
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animals
are
influenced by others. From my own experience, I would be much willing to pay for a product if my friends or someone I look up to recommend it. In fact, consumer product companies well understand the theory. Change the verb form
is
That is
the reason why companies fund countless advertisements and marketing campaign
every year, where they hire celebrities to promote their goods, and Fix the agreement mistake
campaigns
thus
take advantages
of social Fix the agreement mistake
advantage
worships
. Lijieqi streaming shop sold 200 million products in Fix the agreement mistake
worship
online
shopping Correct article usage
an online
festival
is a telling example.
To conclude, wealth status and social influence both largely impact Fix the agreement mistake
festivals
people
’s shopping behavior
other than Change the spelling
behaviour
age
group.Correct article usage
the age
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