Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, economic growth is being turned into a controversial

isue

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issue

among

governments

. There are some points of view about

this

. Some

governments

believe that they should focus on

this

side while some experts say that other aspects have

equall

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equal

importance for countries. Moving on to economic development is considered by some

governments

. There are a lot of reasons for

this

policy.

First

off all, when a government is developed through economical tools, it can be enhanced financial resources, and

then

inject

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into other

progress

programms

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programs

programmes

such

as education, healthcare and etc.

Furthermore

,

having

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progress

in

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the economic

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economic

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economy

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leads to

decline

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a decline

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unemployment rate in the community. Since the government has a strong economical

sitution

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situation

, can create job opportunities which

ough

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ought

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to

grow

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growth

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rate

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the rate

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of employment.

On the other hand

, in order to have a high power around the world,

government

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the government

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should not concentrate on

economy

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the economy

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. By

this

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I mean that other sections like domestic policy, public healthcare, education and so on need to develop.

For example

,

todays

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today

today's

, the USA has the highest power in a variety

fields

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.

In addition

, according to the development theories, only attention to economic

progress

contribute to weak in other sectors like environmental protection programme, crime control, unemployment problems, poverty and etc. which leads to the

governments

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vurnable

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vulnerable

and will counter with external and internal threats like war or domestic revolution. To sum up. In my opinion, only attention to grow of

economy

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the economy

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is not

sufficent

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sufficient

. For having a high power in the world and being a developed country it is crucial for

governments

to consider other types of

progress

programm

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programs

.