All parents want the best opportunities for their children. There are some people who think that schools should teach children skills, but others think having a range of subjects is better for a children's future. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In the
first
line of
this
essay, I should maintain that you cannot find any person who wants a dark fate for his children. Because of the difference between society members, they have distinct opinions about the shining future of their babies. One of these diverse beliefs is in education and everybody believes a good education plays an axial role in a glamorous fate. A club of humans think the best thing for training in a school is skills while there we have another class that thinks having a big range of subjects is pretty suitable for dear kids. As far as I am concerned the
first
club have a better point due to the reasons which will be discussed in the following paragraphs. I think the group mentioned at the beginning has better addressed
this
discussion. All of us were a student many or some years ago. I do not know your opinion but in my personal opinion, skills are more important. By the way of example, my cousin does not even know where his heart is but from the abilities that he learned, he can earn excellent money. To analyze the
second
group according to the latest research, giving so much new information on many subjects can be distractive for children's brains and can make them terribly depressed because they cannot handle
this
heavy increasing load. If you want to see the evidence, I have a sample in my family and you can see her. She went to the private school because of the insistence of her father and the heaviness of lessons and the pressure of homework made her crazy,
such
a regret for her father. I choose the abilities group way because doing something well is better than reading so much content that you hate. Some wise person told something wiser: never compare a monkey and a fish in climbing a tree. If you do
this
, you are dumb. To sum up, for every decision you need to check every aspect like your children's IQ and interests. Anyway,
this
subject is so controversial and one cannot decisively say which one is better either in training skills or teaching many subjects. But there is no change in parents' intention and they always have the best wishes for their kids.
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