Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houseflat Write a letter to your neighbours.In your letter Explain the reasons for the noise Apologise Describe what action you will take

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Dear John, I have

been

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received your letter regarding noise from my house.

Firstly

thank you for

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me know

this

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matter and I

applogise

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apologise

apologize

for the

difficulity

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difficulty

that you have been through

this

week. Recently, I have

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my kitchen renovation and due to

this

work it

make

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a loud noise to

neighbourhood

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the neighbourhood

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, and I

aware

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of that.

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, the drilling

sometime

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sometimes

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can be controlled because it takes a large space to do it, but I promise

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you that

drilling

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work will be ended in a few days.

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, the renovation already 50% have been done and just a few

makeover

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needed

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Therefore

, during

this

time, I will ask my contractor to not start the renovation early in the morning and end it before 5 pm, and I hope

this

solution will make you satisfied, and if not so, you can suggest

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the other way that we can

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. I am

sincerelly

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sincerely

applogise

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apologise

apologize

for

this

matter and if anything that I need to know, please feel free to write back to me and thank you for your concern for

this

neighbourhood. Your neighbour, Lynda

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
19Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

189 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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The Closing

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