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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houseflat Write a letter to your neighbours.In your letter Explain the reasons for the noise Apologise Describe what action you will take

#neighbours #noise #houseflat #apologise #action
Dear John, I have
been
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received your letter regarding noise from my house.
Firstly
 thank you for
let
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 me know
this
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 matter and I
applogise
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apologise
apologize
 for the
difficulity
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difficulty
 that you have been through
this
 week. Recently, I have
do
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 my kitchen renovation and due to
this
 work it
make
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 a loud noise to
neighbourhood
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, and I
aware
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 of that.
Moreover
, the drilling
sometime
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sometimes
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it
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can be controlled because it takes a large space to do it, but I promise
to
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you that
drilling
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 work will be ended in a few days.
In addition
, the renovation already 50% have been done and just a few
makeover
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needed
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.
Therefore
, during
this
 time, I will ask my contractor to not start the renovation early in the morning and end it before 5 pm, and I hope
this
 solution will make you satisfied, and if not so, you can suggest
me
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 the other way that we can
do
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. I am
sincerelly
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sincerely
applogise
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apologise
apologize
 for
this
 matter and if anything that I need to know, please feel free to write back to me and thank you for your concern for
this
 neighbourhood. Your neighbour, Lynda
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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