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Some scientists think that computers will soon become more intelligent than humans. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#scientists #computers #humans
Nowadays.
the
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artificial
intelligence
 is a hot topic among experts. some of them believe that well-trained
computers
 and artificial
intelligence
machines
 will outperform people in many topics. while many others think
the
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computer
intelligence
 has no opportunity to compete
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human
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 in mental activities.
This
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 of view and shows how
computer
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 has no chance to get smarter than the human brain.
Computers
 are widely used in our current era. every house, school and organization has at least one
computer
 or more. And in recent
years
 many giant companies have invested
a huge amounts
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 of money in artificial
intelligence
 to let
machines
 get smarter and outperform
the
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human in some tasks.
for example
. In the
last
 5
years
, Google the giant company has invested billions of dollars in scientific research to enhance the sentiment analysis technology that they are building. the investment aims to let the
machines
 understand the text is written by humans and extracts the intent of each statement. the result was outstanding, Google now can understand what you are trying to say by scanning your text. While
the
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artificial
intelligence
havehas
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have has
have
 got advanced in recent
years
, it is still not comparable to the human ability of free thinking. More and more field experts believe that the most advanced intelligent
machines
 cannot outperform a four
years
 old child in the best scenario.
On the other hand
, what is called
a
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machine
intelligent
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 is actually a predefined
computer
 software created by an expert.
this
 piece of software let
computers
acheive
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achieve
 only one task.
in addition
, the machine by itself cannot get out of the boundaries and the logic built by the software programmer. In conclusion, while
the
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machines
 are getting smarter and better
in
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 doing one task job and
to scan
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 big data, it is way behind
the
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human capabilities in analysis and building knowledge. no doubt without a breakthrough in quantum computing, there is no fear of
computers
 getting close to a human mind.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • artificial intelligence (AI)
  • machine learning
  • emotional intelligence
  • technological singularity
  • ethical concerns
  • job displacement
  • autonomous systems
  • augmented reality
  • cognitive computing
  • data privacy
  • algorithmic bias
  • human-machine collaboration
  • technophobia
  • innovation
  • adaptive systems
  • robotic automation
  • ethical reasoning
  • computational limitations
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