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We can get knowledge from news, but some people think we cannot trust journalist. What do you think? What qualities do you think a successful journalist should have?

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In
this
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 day and age, an increasing number of people are concerned about how citizens can absorb insights through the internet.
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, whether we should or should not trust
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the reporter and their
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 stories is a controversial issue. From my perspective, I partly agree with the statement and I am content that we could have faith in the latest
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,
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 essay will discuss what inner traits are possessed by a successful reporter.
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 with, people are living in a modern technological period with the eruption of the internet and global
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.
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 means that there is an increasing number of unreliable affairs and undergrounded
news
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 which was published by distrust and immoral
reporters
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. We can easily see that, in the present day, there are some journalists who only focus on making profits and releasing tabloid
news
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 which is money-oriented, they do not pay attention to the quality of them.
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, a lot of
reporters
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 often post articles that evolved around personal life scandals of celebrities irrespective of not having confirmation from them. So, sometimes, we do not believe in any underground
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 which was written by unfaithful
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 because it is hard to know which
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 is true or fake.
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 not to say that we stop absurd
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 and stay updated with the latest
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 through social networking sites. There are some credible published by the government portal or some kinds of online webs
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 as
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 BBC
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, CNN
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, and so forth on account of
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 useful knowledge about the world including diseases, terrorists, global warming, and climate change.
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, if we want to have authentic
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, we need qualified
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 who have some characteristics
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 as responsibility, and truthfulness,
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, they have to have loved their jobs. And Lai Van Sam acts as a typical model of influential publishers. He always publishes well-founded articles and never does something which is immoral. In conclusion,
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 there are a great number of distrustful
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 and dishonest
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 in the present day, we still capture the latest
news
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 through social networking sites.
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, publishers should need to have
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 responsibility, openness extraversion, and agreeableness to become good
reporters
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