Nowadays, many familiar have both parents working. Some working parents believe other family members like grandparents can take care of their children, while other think child care centres provide the best care. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In recent years working parents have

to

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devote

their

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most time to working. In

this

regard, some debates are held about whether relatives like grandparents should look after

children

or

child

care

centres

. I side with those parents who think

child

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care

institutions are a better place for

children

to spend time in which I will discuss both views in detail as follows:

child

care

institutions are beneficial to

children

since I am of the opinion that these places provide an environment in which

children

can communicate with their peers;

therefore

, their social interaction

such

as making friends,

playing

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and playing

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in

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the group

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group

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will be improved and it is more likely to become self-confident and successful people in future.

Besides

, in

such

centres

children

have access to educational and recreational facilities that make them not only develop their potential

talent

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like learning

new

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language but

also

enjoying

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their time.

Conversely

, many believe that family members are more reliable to watch

children

since they are much

meticulous

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about

children

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requirements.

In addition

,

children

who are cared

by

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child

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childcare

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care

centres

are in danger of physical or verbal harm by their peers.

However

, there are

much

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difficulties in

this

kind of taking

care

. In some ways, family members are not able to entertain

children

due to their physical disability or low tolerance which might lead to

isolation

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the isolation

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of

children

. In conclusion,

child

care

centres

are more suitable for

children

in comparison to being

took

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care

by

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relatives. The reason for

this

is that

this

condition

result

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in

extension

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an extension

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of social skills,

confident

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and prosperity in future.